Mm. I don't know what you did here, but the first scene and the way you set a certain tone in the first three paragraphs cut deep into a character. I could feel that cool rush of air. Nice work there.
Now, how do we get these two back together ....? :)
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Date: 2018-01-17 03:21 am (UTC)Now, how do we get these two back together ....? :)