What the hell is with this dialogue, dude?
“Reyes,” Hilary called as they entered the homicide division. “There’s a whore here to see you.”
Zayne blinked, taken aback by Hilary’s tone. “I’m – I’m sorry, what did you just say?”
“I believe she said there was a woman of ill repute awaiting your attention.”
“Yeah, I got that, Zek,” Zayne drawled. “What I was hoping for was a little more specificity.”
Because you just know Zayne would need clarification. Not sure digging up this WIP was a good idea now. Hahahaha.
Stay tuned, I guess.
“Reyes,” Hilary called as they entered the homicide division. “There’s a whore here to see you.”
Zayne blinked, taken aback by Hilary’s tone. “I’m – I’m sorry, what did you just say?”
“I believe she said there was a woman of ill repute awaiting your attention.”
“Yeah, I got that, Zek,” Zayne drawled. “What I was hoping for was a little more specificity.”
Because you just know Zayne would need clarification. Not sure digging up this WIP was a good idea now. Hahahaha.
Stay tuned, I guess.

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Date: 2018-08-21 01:10 am (UTC)Also I love that Hilary says "whore" and Andy says "woman of ill-repute". Just says soooo much about their characters!
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Date: 2018-08-21 01:43 am (UTC)You'll find out more soon enough because it's my next project. :D
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Date: 2018-08-28 02:14 am (UTC)Woooot! Can't wait! (Prods your muse.)
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Date: 2018-08-21 12:39 pm (UTC)My notes make no sense either so I have no idea where I was going with this.
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